Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Could you please correct this phrase? Thanks!!!?

"We need to gather all our strength in order to change the conditions of intolerance, xenophobia and racism that are worsen the situation in Italy, the country where we have chosen to live and work, the one we want to grow with, but most of all the country were we want to live and work in peace all together"



I mean grammatically, so I can publish it. Thanks a lot again!



Answer on Could you please correct this phrase? Thanks!!!?



We need to gather all our strength in order to change the conditions of intolerance, xenophobia, and racism that are worsening the living situation in Italy. We have chosen to live, work, and thrive here and are seeking to live in peace.

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